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Update On Book One in #tIRS


So the last few days I have gotten a ton of writing done. In fact, yesterday alone I wrote about three thousand words (the book is now at a little over ten-thousand)! I think that is an all-time high in my writing career. The book is coming along smoothly and I have enjoyed writing this chapter (Chapter Three if anyone is wondering) and it has been interesting exploring my characters.

I feel as if the work before this chapter has been a little challenging as it is really hard for me to start stories, but I’ve kept on trucking and it has gotten a whole lot easier. The story itself has been really interesting to write and as I’ve gone along in it I have begun to discover that this story will take a long time to tell. Right now I am expecting it to be a five book saga, with the first one being the shortest and least complex in the series.

For those of you who don’t know, this book has been in my head for over three years now. My first entry in my outline for it is dated August 22, 2017. You may ask why am I only at 9% through the story then? Well, I hit a bit of writer’s block, which I should have just pushed through, but I didn’t. The draft I’m working on is technically the second draft of the story. I wrote the first draft back in the fall of 2017. But, when I got to about the halfway point, I realized it was not good at all, and I made a huge error. I tried to go back and rework some of it. This ended up in creating a confusing draft with various details chopped. I got worn out with it and just didn’t touch it. The story continued to pester me in my mind those two years, but I ignored it. Two years later, I picked my outline back up. I had a tough choice on my hand, do I continue to push through the awful and confusing draft or restart. It was a painful choice as I had close to thirty-thousand words in that draft, but ultimately I decided to restart. And, it has proved to be the best choice I’ve made in my writing. I made a few changes to the story, particularly in how the story starts, the original starting scene was completely chopped and I made a new one. And it definitely fits for the character and has been a more enjoyable write.

As of right now, I’m a little over ten-thousand words and am only about 9% of the way through the story. I hope to be at over 50% of the way through the story come end of Spring.

My goal for 2020 is to finish the rough draft of this story, and begin to edit it. Then if I have time left, I might begin working on the outline for book two, but it is more likely that I will be saving that project for 2021. It’s a reasonable goal I think, and I will be trying my best to keep it. I also plan on trying to keep this blog going somewhat consistently, updating it at least once every two weeks with updates on the book or an article. But, life happens so we’ll see about that.

From my pen to your paper, may our swords never clash.


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On Writing

Outlining vs. Pantsing


Hey everyone! This is my first official post on this blog, and I thought that there would be nothing more fitting than to do a post on writing. 

As a creative writer, I have discovered that there are two different ways that you can write stories, and both are equally effective. So I thought I would explore a little bit about what each tool does and how different people use the tools.  

If you are a writer, you have probably heard the terms outliner and pantser. They are pretty familiar terms. This article is not saying one is better than the other if you are a pantser, awesome! If you are an outliner, that’s equally as awesome! I’m just here to explore what each means and some pros and cons to each tool. First, let’s define each tool.

Outliner:

An outliner is a writer who discovers their story before jumping into the process of writing it. They can do this in an extremely detailed way, or they can only nail down the bare necessities of their story. 

Pantser:

A pantser is a writer who discovers their story as they write the story. They jump right in and begin to see what happens as they go.

Those two definitions are very broad definitions and there are many other specific definitions that you can find out there. 

So let’s break down some pros to each tool. 

Outliner Pros:

  • They know how their story will end, this gives them more of an idea of how to foreshadow big events. Brandon Sanderson talks about this in his second lecture in the excellent writing class that you can watch for free on YouTube.
  • They don’t have to go back and do as much rewriting because there is a less likely chance for there to be plot holes. Again, this is because the author knows how the story will end. 

Pantser Pros:

  • Their character is more likely to be a really interesting character who develops as the story goes. This is because the author does not know who their character is and they discover them while they write their story. George R.R. Martin does this and it makes his characters, supposedly, really interesting reads (as someone who has not read his books yet I cannot personally say whether or not this is true, I’m just basing this off what the general consensus is).

Now let’s look at a couple of cons.

Outliner Con:

  • There can be less character development as the writer can be focusing more on the plot of the story, versus focusing on the plot of the story.

Pantser Con:

  • Because the writer does not know where their story is going, they can have plot holes which can result in lots of rewriting or plot holes that are left unfixed.

So, how can you avoid these cons? For an outliner one thing that a lot of authors do is interview their character while outlining, they can ask them basic questions or more complicated ones. This gives them a way to know their characters better. I have never pantsed a novel before, but I have a suggestion I think could work. When you are pantsing your novel, keep a notebook beside you, and jot down any major details so that you won’t forget them or so that you can be aware of what the reader knows. 

So what do I do?

For my current series, I plan on outlining every single book. Now, I do not plan on going super in-depth like some writers. When I outlined the first book, I discovered all my major points and who my main characters were and where they would be at the end of the story. I also explored my setting seeing where events would take place. Some authors like to outline every scene that takes place in their book, I don’t. But there is no wrong way to write your story. The way I write my story is going to be different from 99% of other writers, and that is perfectly okay. The way you write is going to be different from 99% of other writers, and that’s awesome! Each author is unique in the way that they write their story, and that is what gives us so many unique and interesting stories to read.


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